This post is dedicate to blogger friend AmitAag and inspired by his word in my comment box.
" deep frm my heart " in response to "Odyssey"
aap kaya samjhen ge gum hamara...aap toe is rooh se waqif nahin....dil to dhadkta hai hamara......aawaz us mein aati nahin...humari muskurahat ke peeche chupa hai gum...jo aap samajh pate nahin
boo na lag jaye kisi ko is dil ki...hum paas kisi ke aate nahin...nazren jhuka chal deten hain hum.....bus muskura deten hain hum.....aap samajh paate nahindidaar karva diya jis din hum ne apne dil ka....aap seh na paao ge.....hum kaya tadpte hain
aap bhi tadap jao ge.. ..kahin kaamp na jaye aap ki rooh , kuch aisa soch hum apna gum
batate nahin....aur aap samajh pate nahin.
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photo credit blogs.indiwire.com
intense!
ReplyDeletethank you sujatha
DeleteI'm highly honoured Alka, and deeply indebted...you are so magnanimous and large hearted to have mentioned my name as an inspiration behind such pretty, lovely and meaningful poem...but sorry, I can't share the credit...it ALL goes to YOU!
ReplyDeleteMy pleasure amit.
DeleteThis is a poem from a large heart. I wish i could write in Hindi. Its very difficult for me though i try and read everything that comes my way. thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeletethank you shamsud.
Deleteabs... beautiful.. where does your inspiration lie? I am in awe:)
ReplyDeletethank you kajal
Deletewah!! bahut khoob!!
ReplyDeleteshukriya !
DeleteLovely writing, Alka!
ReplyDeletethank you rahul
DeleteNice to see bloggers bonding this well.. :) I loved the way you have penned it down..! :) awesome..
ReplyDeletethank you gayatri.
Deletekya aisa ho sakta hai ki inke paas bas rooh hi hai sharir nahi? Just my interpretation after watching a horror movie a few hours back:)
ReplyDeletelol nice one arnab.
DeleteI am not big on Hindi, but I do make and effort to try and follow it and these lines came across as genuine and powerful. It is so wonderful to see the inspirations being made possible by other bloggers. This life is too short to focus only on the challenges and difficulties and ugliness, and your poem captures the essence of that feeling.
ReplyDeletethank you subhorup,
DeleteVery soulful! Choo jaata hain!
ReplyDeletethank you deepa.
Deleteawesome...superb... :)
ReplyDelete-Good piece of information.
Deletethank you banti.
Delete@cynosure thank you soo much!
DeleteSorrow, Joy, Longing, Anguish...the Sweet Pain of Love...the entire gamut of human emotions expressed so eloquently in just a few lines. Hmmm....love it
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