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Thursday 17 May 2012

kaise kahen hum (lyrics in hindi)

this is my 1st attempt to compose lyrics in hindi,i want frank opinion from all of you...be critical or rude i wont mind at all
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kaise kahen yeh dil toe ab sambhalta nahin ..... humari yeh dadken tumhari hi aawaz ban gayi.....socha toe yahi tha ki youn hi akele ,chupke se nikal jayen ge.....magar jo mude hum humari parchaie se tumhari hi khushboo aane lagi ....jub saansen bhi humari tumhara naam gungune lagi...hamari muskuraht ke peeche bhi tumhara naam dikhne laga....  aab tum hi batao  hum kaise  keh den , tumhare bina  reh pain ge......kaise kahen hum yeh dil  aub sambhalta nahin.....sambhalta nahin

ruke the hum kuch pal socha tha youn hi mud jayen ge....socha tha youn hi chpke se bina tum ko dekhe nikal  jayen ge....sheeshe me  jo dekha aankhon mein humari  tumhara hi chehra dikne laga.... kambakht yeh dhadken bhi yun hi kuch ruk ruk kar chalne lagi ...aab tum hi batao bhala  kaise yeh keh den , tumhare bin hum reh pain ge......kaise kahen hum yeh dill to aub sambhalta nahin......sambhalta nahin

yeh hum ko kaya hua hai ...chach kar bhi humare kadam tumhare  kadmo ke peeche chalne se thumte nahin...humara husn bhi  tumhari tareef karne se rukta nahin....humhara dil tum pe fida hai ...aab yeh sambhle sambhlta nahin ...aab tum hi batao bhala hum kaise yeh keh den , tumhare bin hum reh pain ge......kaise kahen hum yeh dil to aub sambhalta nahin.....sambhalta nahin


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6 comments:

  1. ...beautifully composed Alka, as was expected of you:) plz keep it up, I want more:) Thanks...

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  2. Hi alka,

    With my knowledge of Hindi, I should not comment much but it does sound beautiful to me....Keep it going ! :)

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  3. Hey Alka

    It's a nice attempt but I faced some problem in reading it as it is written in english. It would be good if you type the hindi poems in Hindi. You can use the google transliterate link to do that. I also use this link for my blog. I am giving the google transliterate link here. http://www.google.com/transliterate

    Thanks
    Gaurav

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  4. lyrics is good however it sounds more like a shayari. just an advice, when you write lyrics for a song, make sure its crisp n short as much as it can without changing the meaning of the song... this goes for everyline.......i'm sure you can do much better than this

    Thanks,
    Marshal

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    1. though tht was my first attempt ..thank u fr yr advise ..will keep in mind :))

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